Take you in my arms
you won’t come to harm
can you see!
A contest entry
- He played me like a harp by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended April 13, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Such a sweet and enticing little take... x
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This is sweet. I liked the first and second lines, but the third changes the mood quite a bit. It goes from romantic and sincere to a tiny bit cheesey. I like it anyway.
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