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Why do I love you?

We fight all the time
and are never on the same page.
Why do I still love you?

You talk down to me
and I always end up crying
Why do I still crave you?

You break my heart
and leave me in ruins.
Why do I still go back to you

There comes a time
when enough is enough.
My head screaming "get a grip girl,
unless you're dying to cry you're heart out"
But my heart just wont listen.

 

I will always go back

and still ask myself

"Why do I love you?"

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  • Stormy Sky
    May 5, 2008

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    I like how you ended almost all the stanza's with a why question. nice touch. good write and good luck.

    ~stormy


  • Pursed Poker Lips
    April 15, 2008

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    I can't believe this whole time that we've been friends you never showed me your masterpieces. I love your works thus far. Favorite line: 'and leave me in ruins,' great imagery!
    -Natalie