between mast & sail,
sheets spoke-
our body language
charting
in blue.
A contest entry
- PIF By Lavender Butterfly by Lavender Butterfly.
520 points, ended April 12, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prewrite Mania 3 by Celticmoon.
800 points, ended May 27, 2008, 49 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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An amazing voyage I "sea"
Beautiful words; they have such an incredible substance to them, and I see you took the gold yet again. You are amazing
Carrie
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Ahh Chase as always your words send the mind sailing with lovely imagery. Softly you speak here in few words and yet still say so much. I love this. Thank you for entering. Best of luck to you.
Blessings
Bel
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Thoughts
Pulling from one known color, were you able to lure out the most in what should be foreseen by the human eye. -
ok seriously not even fair! another gold trophy for such few words? damn man! good job. another congrats for gold.
luke -
VERY GOOD
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wow
to me, it seemed as though your words are very deep.
great write!!
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glorious poem! It went really well with the picture prompt! Wonderful diction usage!
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this is cliver, so much said with so little words thats an art in its self congrats on the gold
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i really feel you definatly deserved that gold; bravvvoo!
also i have to say the title really caught my eye & for so short of words you've impacted a very good punch into the imagery you've chosen! greatness as always
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Marvelous display of words and a great take on the prompt! What I truly love is how you managed to use blue and not sound cliche. Well done!
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