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My deadly reasons

I wander along,
Singing the words
To my own song,
My witnesses are birds

I pass through the graveyard
Dancing through the worn dirt
The wind bellowing like a bard
Carressing my body like a flirt

As I reach a headstone I pause
To see a cold and lifeless angel of vanity
It takes me a while to remember the cause;
The reason for my insanity

The reason for all profanity

The reason why I came to dig my grave.

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  • Kari gold member
    April 14, 2008

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    I love the imagery in this piece. I could actually see the grave being made to...very well done and the best of luck