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Kisses

 Soft lip kisses

fresh as
 
   sunrise dew drop

velvet petals.

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Prompt: soft
10 words

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  • HeavenScent4U
    April 12, 2008
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    I think this is soft and gentle and beautiful my friend


  • dustookie2
    April 12, 2008
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    The gentleness of a new day dawning splashing water droplets in slow motion the softness of a kiss. Excellent take on the prompt word supported by your artwork yet the poem strong enough to stand alone. You take this to another level and all with only ten words...the beauty of the short poetic form the abilty to say so much in so few words. Good luck