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Way Down

Shallow grave
of lost innocence.
Immersed in the unfathomable sadness.

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Prompt: Deep

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  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 12, 2008

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    A very good take on the prompt of being deep.
    Thanks for sharing, all the best to ya!

    -Timothy aka poeticweaver~