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Soft.

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Tears swelled soft in her eyes
when tenderly saying goodbyes

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  • Mairi bheag gold member
    April 12, 2008

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    Bazza, I'm not 100% convinced by the plural "goodbyes" here, but it is indeed a tender little couplet. I hope it does well for you in the contest.