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Unreversable.

As I write to you, this will be the end.

I realize now this I cannot amend.

The mirror across the room lies in shatters.

The cuts on my arm seem not to matter.

Of my dampened spirit you seem unaware.

Or maybe it’s that you just don’t care.

As of the memories I cannot erase.

I understand now that no one can take your place.

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  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    May 16, 2008

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    Welcome To Allpoetry

    Hi meganmalicious,

    Dear Child please don't do this to your self your are young and got a lot to look forward to in life. Boys come and go. And besides the ones your age are immature and are bound to break your heart. It's their job. !! Wait until your older to date. You got plenty of time. And cutting yourself does not solve a thing either I know I used to do this myself. It only seems to be a fad nowadays every other poem I read is about cutting. You'll only regret those scars as you get older believe me I do and am embarrassed by them. My husband says that it was dumb and I was only trying to get attention. I wasn't but still. IT'S embarrassing believe me. You'll understand once you get my age. Anyway Hope you enjoy your stay here. If you have any questions about the site feel free to im me or any of the greeters. If you every need someone to talk to you can message me for that too. I'm always here.

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  • Candy Morphine
    April 12, 2008

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    my fav lines:
    The mirror across the room lies in shatters.

    The cuts on my arm seem not to matter

    this is really good

    again its short but the emotion is raw and it works really well