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Deep

Underground
Lies a bruised heart
Within blood
It still beats

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prompt deep
10 words

A contest entry

please tell me what you really think

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  • penman gold member
    April 16, 2008
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    Excellent

    What a great take on the prompt. Wonderful choice of ten words.