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just sticks


petals of fear
falling in despair

withered,
like her heart

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Prompt ~ Flower

In a list

A contest entry

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  • thepoetssoul
    April 12, 2008

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    Very nice,exellent feel and rhythm.
    The imagery and wording is wonderful
    You did an awesome job on the prompt
    Splendidly done indeed.

    Tony


  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 11, 2008

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    Excellent

    I enjoyed the portrait you drew with few words weaved, thanks for sharing, and all the best within the contest!

    -Timothy aka poeticweaver~