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Dead Flower

Decay
End of cycling
Withering perfumes
Beauty fades meaningless
Forgotten

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"Flower" <- Used as a prompt.

A contest entry

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  • Fourthaxis
    April 20, 2008
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    So True!

    There was this poem in seventh grade I think, by Robert Herrick. "Fair pledges of a fruitful tree" and so on... about the underappreciated truth of the life of flowers! Should read it if ever you have nothing to do that is! Best of luck in contest!


  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 11, 2008

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    Another wonderfully inscribed piece.
    This is a great contest, you did wonderfully!

    Peace
    -Timothy aka poeticweaver~