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candy floss





dreams floating on
candy floss clouds

perfect slumber
for her


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Prompt ~ soft

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  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 12, 2008

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    A very gentle read, a feel good read.
    Thanks for sharing, now have me tired.
    All the best in the contest.

    -Timothy aka poeticweaver~


  • poet2angels gold member
    April 12, 2008

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    This title caught my eye. Someone once nicknamed me candy floss lol...Lovely poem!
    Best wishes!

    Lynda