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Falling From View

Peering inside,
  I fell,

somewhere within me,
  I'm still falling.



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  • Patpowers silver member
    April 20, 2008

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    Hope you are able to stop falling! Nice prompt on this! Short work and yet one that I enjoyed! THANKS!