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wish astrayed

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i am wondering,

my wish is missing
from well's depthness.
















































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  • Namita
    April 15, 2008

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    This is so beautiful... although, I would say- the last word is a mixture of "depth" and "deepness"... if it was unintended, you can change it either

    Lovely work...

    - namita

  • tara wilson gold member
    April 12, 2008

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    yes....that has happened to a few of mine. also...sometimes, my wishes...could not have been so shallow...

    excellent