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sounds of everlasting

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your petals
are half notes,

penetrating the music -
of eternity.




















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There is a flower named 'everlasting'

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  • Namita
    April 15, 2008

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    Really? Nor have I heard of such a flower- I hope it is as beautiful as the name it holds...

    So beautiful, this one

    - namita


  • Poesing
    April 15, 2008
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    short and sweet, although I've never heard of the flower itself.


  • tara wilson gold member
    April 12, 2008
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    beautiful