I exhale,
shooting stars
trickling
down
your rings;
bending gravity.
A contest entry
- prompting you by Lavender Butterfly.
420 points, ended April 12, 2008, 14 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is awesome! I love it!
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*shakes head*
wonderful!
luke -
wow i liked this one also
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wow this is beautiful
I loved it great job
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iv read a good amount of your poetry your really talented
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There was a god between that big space in the poem I think...I will take that feeling away from here intentional or not. This is quiet and well done. Very clean. Although I must admit that I think you should expand eventually. Eh. What do I know?
Lovely work here and congrats on the silver.
All the best ,
James
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this is so much more creative then what i'm used to reading. such a change, such a relief. i love it. you're talented
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bending gravity eh? you bend the creative bar every time so consistent great stuff
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Exellent, a very well done piece here for the prompt!
All the best blackday, peace.. and thanks for sharing!
-Timothy aka poeticweaver~
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I LOVE this!!!!!!!!
So unique and just magical.....
Wow.....This is amazing!
Lynda
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