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Me




Inside;
Come and see
I offer you
eternal bliss

              Me...
 

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  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    April 13, 2008
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    Beautiful

    Oh man this was one heck of a great poem & I really love the raw complexion through out this poem and how you wrote this poem too. so well worded and really leaves one pondering what is inside of them with so few of words. any ways nice work and keep it up good luck with the contest


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    April 13, 2008
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    awwwww sweet


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    April 12, 2008
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    Aww.. very sweet bro... Love what you did with the 'deep' prompt!


  • Dorie
    April 12, 2008
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    Ummmm