His eyes
tracing textures of my lips
before we touch.
♥♥
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Author notes
prompt: soft
(10 words)
A contest entry
- prompting you by Lavender Butterfly.
420 points, ended April 12, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Anticipation is everything...wonderful, angel poet
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10 words of sheer sensual pleasure .. the image is there in front of my eyes and oh so true to life.
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indeed softness penned in your words. Beautiful. Best wishes in the comp
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Lovely
Sweet sis, you always captivate me in the moment.
Each verse my eyes are glued to the beauty of you.
Be blessed, and thanks for sharing!
-Timothy aka poeticweaver~
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awwwwwwwwwwww TY my sweet Bro! you are too sweet to me
Lynda
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Beautiful words of love.. gentle, soft and delicate
a very lovely take off the prompt Lynda
All my best to you!!
Jazzy
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ty my dear friend
Lynda
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