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Falling Asleep In Spring

Tangerine temperaments slept,
falling like snow,
melting slowly in mints.




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  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 12, 2008

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    ouuu

    I like this, the way you turned it into a soft sigh.
    Thanks for sharing, and wonderful reading ya.

    Peace, -Timothy aka poeticweaver~


  • poet2angels gold member
    April 12, 2008

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    This makes me feel so refreshed sigh like breathing in Spring and melting my heart in a scent of flowers....sigh

    Lynda