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They..





Close eyes of deads,
                    gently,
necessary to open
of alives.





















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~spiritualangel~

Prompt: Soft

A contest entry

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  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 12, 2008

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    Good.

    I like this here, a very well versed piece from the prompt!
    All the best, this is going to be hard for the judge.

    -Timothy aka poeticweaver~