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Velvet Moments


Tracing fingertips
gently feather silhouette,
caressing heart’s love

to sigh~

 

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Prompt: soft
Credit: (http://www.graffitiverite.com/NBMS131HilDarSilhouette.JPG)

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  • This is just lovely sis!!! A beautifully penned piece of so few words! Well done!!!


    • jasminerose
      May 4, 2008

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      Thank you sweetie for the very lovely compliment
      You always know how to bring me a smile
      Hope all is well
      Jazzy


  • catz Moderators member
    April 20, 2008

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    Such a softly senseous poem. I love the last line...'caressing heart's love'... a lovely phrase

    Dee


  • vici377
    April 17, 2008

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    wow..took soft to a different level..combined with love seems like it should be cliche..however this is not..a sigh..to end it is just icing on the cake so to speak..amazing..thanx so much for sharing..blessings..namaste..

    • jasminerose
      April 17, 2008
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      Awww thank you!! Such lovely compliments you give!
      I think love should always be as delicate as a feather and as breathtaking as a sigh.. I completely agree with the icing
      Thank you so much for the beautiful comment!!
      Linda


  • poppa
    April 16, 2008

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    Beautiful write....almost feels like a soft whisper upon the soul.....


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    April 15, 2008

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    And that was just like a gentle and loving sigh too!

    How gorgeous!

    • jasminerose
      April 15, 2008
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      How we girls love to sigh~~~ don't we?
      Thank you once more for your lovely thoughts on my poetry Jackie
      You are too sweet!
      Linda

  • Liquid memories
    April 12, 2008

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    loving soft words caress the strings of one`s heart. gentle with feelings. indeed nice caring velvet moments.


  • Fug-azi
    April 12, 2008

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    You and our sis Lynda are just so good at writing sensuality in verse .. a sigh just doesn't seem enough


  • moonbumps silver member
    April 12, 2008

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    And sigh I most certainly did-all the way off my chair!
    Beeutiful write-gentle and tender...
    love Hilly


  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 12, 2008

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    Lovely as always sweet soul and friend.
    Much love and light~

    -Timothy aka poeticweaver~


  • poet2angels gold member
    April 11, 2008

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    this is gorgeous!
    Such a lovely soft write that truly does make one sigh

    Lynda

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