Tracing fingertips
gently feather silhouette,
caressing heart’s love
to sigh~
Author notes
Prompt: soft
Credit: (http://www.graffitiverite.com/NBMS131HilDarSilhouette.JPG)
A contest entry
- prompting you by Lavender Butterfly.
420 points, ended April 12, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is just lovely sis!!!
A beautifully penned piece of so few words! Well done!!!
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Thank you sweetie for the very lovely compliment
You always know how to bring me a smile
Hope all is well
Jazzy
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Such a softly senseous poem. I love the last line...'caressing heart's love'... a lovely phrase
Dee
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wow..took soft to a different level..combined with love seems like it should be cliche..however this is not..a sigh..to end it is just icing on the cake so to speak..amazing..thanx so much for sharing..blessings..namaste..
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Awww thank you!! Such lovely compliments you give!
I think love should always be as delicate as a feather and as breathtaking as a sigh.. I completely agree with the icing
Thank you so much for the beautiful comment!!
Linda
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Beautiful write....almost feels like a soft whisper upon the soul.....
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And that was just like a gentle and loving sigh too!
How gorgeous!
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How we girls love to sigh~~~ don't we?
Thank you once more for your lovely thoughts on my poetry Jackie
You are too sweet!
Linda
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loving soft words caress the strings of one`s heart. gentle with feelings. indeed nice caring velvet moments.
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You and our sis Lynda are just so good at writing sensuality in verse .. a sigh just doesn't seem enough
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And sigh I most certainly did-all the way off my chair!
Beeutiful write-gentle and tender...
love Hilly
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Lovely as always sweet soul and friend.
Much love and light~
-Timothy aka poeticweaver~
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this is gorgeous!
Such a lovely soft write that truly does make one sigh
Lynda
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Awww thank you my sweet friend
Jazzy
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