A creation from man's rib
she walked right out of the
Heavenly showroom, with all
her luscious curves
The mighty serpent, even knows
that he is no match for this
insatiable creature of a sexual
nature, the mold that will bring
future empires and kings to
their knees
"Eat of this forbidden fruit,
take in the flavor and juices"
she demands to Adam, as she
gently massages his thick shaft
With no hesitation, he sinks his
teeth into that, which is prohibited
She, being the first to indulge in
this taboo sensation, was the one to
gain the carnal knowledge and seen
what a man Adam really was, and now,
he notices her voluptuous breasts and
for some unknown explanation, feels
a hardness in his cock
With a dripping, wet pussy, Eve throws
him to the ground and impales her soft
and tight womanhood onto him, the beginning
of the very dirty deeds, that would later
drive Caligula insane and men would sell
their souls to the Devil himself, for that
taste of nectar, from woman's sinful garden
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A contest entry
- The Knowledge Of Eve by Glasyalabolas.
800 points, ended May 12, 2008, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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One of the best subjects
But I have always thought that God's punishment for carnal "awareness" was the paradigm of good and evil.
This is a subject that can be revisited for the rest of your life.
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What a temptation!
Certainly a well placed gold trophy! Bravo!!!
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Very well written piece that to me is not only sensuous and without using explicit wording, conveys this great sense of temptation and desire.
Good write and congrats on gold.
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So sensual, and all the while that you are reading this, you have the feeling of you yourself partaking of what's forbidden. You flawlessly convey the explosive and nearly unbearable erotic frenzy that must have been present at the first taste of that prohibited fruit. Thought-provoking, yet lusty enough to make the reader break out into a sweat. Even though I have read only a little of your work, but I can already tell that this is one of your best, and if I am to be proved wrong, what your work has in store for me may be something beyond my mental capacity. I am also surprised that this did not win the contest. In any case, this is an absolute masterpiece and one of my favourites in the whole wide world of poetry. BRAVO!!!!!
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yes! i think i may want to call you over for a little lunch and a discussion over a contract with your body lust
you excite me
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Very beautiful I love the opening stanza - how she walks out of the heavenly showroom. Its nice to have the story in a natural form
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Holy Moly~~
What a piece You have penned and the images grab at Spirit with intensity
Magnificent my Friend!!
A creation from man's rib
she walked right out of the
Heavenly showroom, with all
her luscious curves~
very Creative verse...
Eat of this forbidden fruit,
take in the flavor and juices"
What temptation
Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Wow! Quite a different approach to the forbidden fruit, but hell I loved it!!!
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WoW!! I am impresssed with the trashy truth you put into the story of Adam and Eve. Gives it a twist for sure. Nice!
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wooowowow this was amazing
I loved it so much
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