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crazy and sublime

i know we all feel this way
about our lovers

at the time there is no other
time stands still its such a thrill

its like ecstasy combined with pain
we fear it will never last yet we hang on

we bring all of our stuff from our past
no matter how good it feels

no matter its like we want the pain
we look for the same problems
over and over again

why i ask does love feel right
as we reach for the past

old hurts of sorts
feel like comfort

why i ask

can we not find peace with love

why does it wring us out

 

it

keep us awake at night
reaching deep within ourselves

why do we search for this kind of love

i ask you to give me an answer

write me back in poetry, song or rhyme
i want to know why this kind of love
is always crazy and sublime........

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  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    April 14, 2008

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    The words you write here are so true. I love this piece. It is just wonderful. Well done.

    All the best
    Wayne Leon


  • Perception
    April 12, 2008
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    Hm... I'm not sure... What I think about this one...


    thanks for entering


  • tomisb
    April 12, 2008
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    Our mind creates a story. It makes the story more important than the experience.
    Love,
    Tom B.


    • candyinchelsea
      April 12, 2008

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      thank you tom,
      you are such a wise soul.
      i love the way you look out for me.
      be well
      c

      • tomisb
        April 12, 2008
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        It is easy to love when you can without expectation. It is easy to give when you do it only for the blessing implied.

        Relationships are entirely another paradigmn. We create expectations that we don't even know we have created and it is here that our story about how it is supposed to be gets in the way of how it is. Then we have to ask ourselves which we are willing to have. Often giving up our story is an act of bravery and vulnerabilty that is a greater request than we can comply with.

        For a deeper look at this, read my piece Marriage Letter. If any of this helps, please help yourself. I am blessed if you gain.

        Love, Tom B.


  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    April 11, 2008
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    Superb

    A very nice write indeed. Brings to mind the old Barbara Streisand/Robert Redford movie: "The Way We Were". Sorry, I would provide you with a specific URL, in case you'ld never seen it; however for some wierd reason I'm having problems with accessing information others might like to have.

    • candyinchelsea
      April 12, 2008
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      thank you

      i love the way we were,
      i have watched that movie so many time i can act it out.barbara and i go way back.
      i love all her classic movies.
      i think thsats where i got my imagination from.
      and hanging out with lots of drag queens.
      ahhh nothing like a cassic.
      thank you
      as she would say
      can it be that it was all so simlple then
      or has time re written every line.
      if we were all to do it over again
      would we?could we?should we?
      the way we were ta ta the way we were.
      have an amazing day

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