I shall weather here forever,
I hope you understand.
I want to hook the big one,
swimming inside my river.
If I hold out long enough
thy shall deliver.
Great tributary can take away,
ti's also a giver.
Lustrous tiles sit in rickety ways,
nigh on to the edge.
It's the chance I have to take,
hoping this contingency pays.
Prismatic color airs to glorified sight,
embedded within cascading stream.
Muses flow by in glistening light,
as I cast unto fleeting dream.
Author notes
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credit artist image in contest.
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired Contest. by delightfulmess.
450 points, ended April 24, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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awesome imagery, well done with the prompt!
Tasha
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Oooooh that last stanza is fantastic. It could almost stand alone as a poem itself.
Well done thank you for entering my contest.
Delila
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Wonderfully done on the pic.
Great imagery and wording.
Splendidly done indeed
Best of wishes to you.
Tony
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Very lyrical and I really like the rhyme scheme... Nice take on the prompt! Well done...
Ken
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yours is better....awsome once again.good luck
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