Though acceptance
only cued in curled toes.
Fantasia beguiled,
imprisoning the limelight
of my vestibule.
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Oh my, this is deep and powerful. I love it!
Kari
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Not many words.....So much meaning!! This is a beautifully written poem!! thanks for sharing! Jess
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Lovely. I enjoy all of your poetry.
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I find your poetry to always be striking. Such deep thought, illiteration. I saw the picture prompt for this... you've captured it well
Dee
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ok! did I read that right....imprisoning the limelight
of my vestibule?
Are we talking in the medical sense here...if so fantastic...love it..
Good luck
Simon -
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I think you got my drift just fine
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I have said it a lot before simply put you are the
number one women of words.
Bravo Bravo.
Blessings,
Frozentearz -
wow, i'm too long winded to write something like this so well, as you may well know, or remember...
good luck in the contest!
blessed be, m'lady
mike, aka jonathan wikkins -
i love this to pieces! love the title and the words so descriptive in such few words.
many blessings *stomps
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In reading,one hears an antisapation of expectancy and exhileration of an event.Very descriptive verse in short.Nicely done Poetess!
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Wowzers! Really like the depth in this!
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Nicely done.
Great take best of luck in the contest.
Delila
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a good poem, short and curled, the toes touch the air an move with grace. mosit solitude, make it seems all wet and warm
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Brilliant piece of word here hun
If you dont get gold i'll lose all faith in the contest system Nice to see you back writing after such a long absence too
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