It's been a long time coming
But we are finally there
Your care is forthcoming
In the laughter we share
I always said I despised you
For not being in my life
This longing is new
You no longer cause me strife
You are my big brother.
This bond we do share,
Can not be built with another.
Our love goes beyond compare.
I always will love you
And you will always be my Bro
No matter what you do
No matter where you go
My pride of you is clear
Though Im hesistant in its display
Your choice of career
Forced you to go away
But now you are here
Thats all I care about
So come and have a beer
We'll have fun without a doubt
Author notes
This is for my brother
A contest entry
- Brotherly/Sisterly Love by Crazy9Piano8Freak.
600 points, ended December 15, 2008, 57 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Awww so sweet and very beautiful here hunny, this is everything, so much love and beauty
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great piece here!
you show much love for your big brother
great ending stanzas:
"My pride of you is clear
Though Im hesistant in its display
Your choice of career
Forced you to go away
But now you are here
Thats all I care about
So come and have a beer
We'll have fun without a doubt"
mike, aka jonathan wikkins -
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well thank you very much Jonathon wikkins. I am glad you liked this.
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