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Bad Day(gay poem)

I can't stand getting out of bed in the morning.
I can't stand looking in that rainbow coloured mirror.
I can't stand changing into clothes that are too big.
I can't stand the sights as I can't stand walking to school.
I can't stand going to the dentist!
I can't stand studying stupid physics for exams!
I can't stand going to the high school for band practice!
I can't stand the people who try to be my friend at band!
I hate how I can't see the stars because of city lights!
I hate how I'm always the one who is in the way!
I hate it when nobody understands and they make jokes!
I hate how there is never enough comfort food!
I hate how this day went.
I really hate your face!
I had a really bad day!

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Written December 11th, 2003

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  • JPuchyr
    March 7, 2004
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    good list poem...not much to it other than the list...i concur on the metaphoric gayness of this poem hehe on to the next...better be better


  • April Renee
    December 11, 2003
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    for some reason i read the rainbow colored mirror as in you not knowing who you are...*gay poem*...i dont know..maybe its a hidden message..or maybe you just had a really bad day...lol..in any case...well done..enjoyed the rant

    ~*~Blu~*~
    Edited on Dec 11, 1:33 because ''.

  • Velvet Orchid
    December 11, 2003
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    Well this certainly brought a few nerdy cackles to me... I found this piece quite amusing. The end was what seemed to ring my ears the most. I've heard those lines a few times... Well done.
    -Ken