You said you loved me
I thought you meant it
but no you left me
and here I sit
writing this pathetic poem
of how you broke my heart
and then I think about
how you ripped every inch apart
Ive tried to part with my feelings
to leave you all behind
but for some reason my hearts not willing
to loose that bit of you
I'm stuck her wondering what you would do
if you loved me like you used to
Author notes
I got bored again . . . sorry its so short once again my rhyming sucked . . . oh well
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Comments
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Love the length and the raw and tender emotions that are packed into it. Nice.
-BON*BON
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this is awsum!
its short but straight to the point!
really good! -
Omg Dude I Loves This Its A Real Great Poem I Know Exsactly How you Feel You Love Them Still But you Really Dont Want To
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-{Holey Applejuice!}-
-{Hehe. Just ignore that... This poem is awesomeness! Grr, I wish I woulda written it! XD
Gooderest Job!
Enchanted-Emo}-
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