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[ I reach out, ]

I reach out,
but can't feel his skin.
I know he's there, I can see him.
But im being held back,
by some crazy force.
And I can't seem to touch him.
No matter how hard I try.

She's staring again.
Doesn't she know they're watching.
Doesn't she relize it will never happen,
me and her.
We just arn't mant to be.


He looks like he's giving up,
so, I scream.
"Please, no." I scream.
But I know he can't hear.
"I need you."

She can't need me.
Our love is forrbidden.
I do love her,
but we are trapped.
We can't be together.

I look closely,
leaning in to see.
He doesnt look to happy,
in fact, he looks angry.

Why won't she stop,
can't she just see.
I need to be alone.
We arn't meant to be.

I won't stop.

She needs to stop.

He can't give up.

I'm giving up.

It's not over.

It's forbidden,
It's over.

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photo promt.... bordum... but it was fun

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  • trinajean
    April 12, 2008

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    I loved how you went from his opinion and then back to hers! It really made the poem feel more personal, which always makes for a good read! You brought the characters to life! Great Job! Thanks for you entry and good luck!