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Silent murder

Shadows move across the wall
whispering voices fill the hall

glinting silver, pointed knives
listen cause this is no lie
someone here shall die

 

footsteps sound as they come near

laughing voices fill the air

I am aware of eyes on me

dare I open mine to see?

darkness hovers

I freeze under the covers

 

something touches my throat
its cold and sharp
a harsh whisper fills the my ear
there is no hope for my fear

My body's shaking violently

a knife pressed to my throat

a bead of sweat mingles with a tear

a kiss on my cheek from dry cold lips 

a trickle of blood ... becomes a pool 

 

Alas it is over

said and done

my body cold and drained

warm blood runs down my neck

my eyes are cold

laughter fading with the footsteps

 

Day is dawning

I am not yawning

limply lying

listen to the drops of blood

they form a flood on the floor

running slowly out the door 

Find me victim of silent murder

 

Author notes

This is a rather weird poem I cooked up out of shear boredom . . . .. so ya! and I could not find anything to rhyme with Murder so . . . suggestions?
Ya and sorry its kinda weird . . .

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  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    April 15, 2008

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    WOW

    Your words have painted a very dark and frightening picture...found myself holding my breath... niaish for entering and for sharing

  • xsadxnegix
    April 12, 2008
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    wicked poem..great job //.-