From my eyes came a stream of lullabies and forget-me-nots
My fingers grasped at the breath lost upon the stars
I tried stitching secrets into your forlorn attire
because being a pick me up made life so much easier.
I am the type of girl who verbalized happiness
and made your tired eyes see beauty amongst pain.
We were the type of tragedy with a smile
that couldnt be over looked in the book rack.
I am the type of girl
where "the end" just couldnt cut it.
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Option 2
InfiniteCaitlin
Yeah thats me.
A contest entry
- I'm the kind of girl/boy who.....(easy, creative, fun) by Stormy Sky.
400 points, ended June 3, 2008, 24 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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'I tried stitching secrets into your forlorn attire'
this is the best line i've read in such a long time!
such a beautiful image of hiding secrets, i absolutely adore it <3
the ending is very powerful, it's sad as well.
don't think like that though bby.
ly <33
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amazing as allways hun- i havent been on for a whail but still the secont i come here you work makes it all worth it- do you know of PostSecret?
drop me a line sometime (LunaShadowCat3@yahoo.com) something tells me i'm supposed to talk to you more now *smiles* yay for words from a ramdome AP stranger.
Constance Styoko of the Change -
Wow. that ending is powerful. good job <3
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I am the type of girl
where "the end" just couldnt cut it.
These two lines really spoke to me. I believe that they say a lot about you as a person. The way you've portrayed yourself is very beautifull and i applaud your work. Very nicely written.
Good write and good luck.
~stormy
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Caitlin! I've missed you darlin. It's good to see you writing again, even if you have been writing and I've just been missin it. This is amazing, just to go along with everything that you write, dear. Hope all is going well for you. I love you hunnie.
♥shantalina
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