This is why I am better:
I'm the kind of girl
who will take what I give
and throw it back,
who will go running in
with no chance in hell,
who will stand against a giant
and win by force of wits,
and who will stand in front of you
because you think I need an ego check.
Author notes
option 2
Adden Lee
it was really hard to keep it at ten lines and i had to cut a few, so let me know if it seems something is missing so i can try to fix it.
A contest entry
- I'm the kind of girl/boy who.....(easy, creative, fun) by Stormy Sky.
400 points, ended June 3, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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=^.^= no, i love it. absolutely love it. the greatest thing about it is the confidence that oozes out of the lines with a kinda of "bite me, bitch" attitude.
and who will stand in front of you
because you think I need an ego check
i love these lines because i think a lot of girls can connect with one.
good write and good luck.
~stormy
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many thanks, and it's one of those things that anyone in high school can connect to and it started as me ranting so I'm really happy you liked and that it flowed together. Many thanks again.
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