I flutter about
in my pink slippers
sipping
on your latest concoction
vodka kisses
carve shapes into this
gossamer heart
still beating like a paper drum
your heated dream falls
in time
as mystery plays
it’s own little tune
you ask me to be your butterfly
freshly emerged
from your cocoon
dripping
d
r
o
p
s
of freedom
I just hover before you
naked
with flesh fingers crawling
from this dagger of dependency
you remain hypnotized
by my unspoken words
waiting for me to disappear
with my slippers and drink unspilled
reality mingles with such a sweet sting
and you remain in love
with this hurricane of danger
as I flutter away
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i know these feeling to well
you wrote this
with heart
a nd truth
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a wonderful write. Vodka kisses...hmmmmm...now that is a picture to ponder 
Love, Lane
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seems like something Lane would like. I figured the best way to honor her is to read all the entries to her latest contests, in case she doesn't make it back to do so herself.
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wow the words in this are amazing...voda kisses, paper drum, drink unspilled..flutter away...it's awesome.
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MMMMMMMMMM!!
vodka kisses, and hurricane danger, i shall stay hynotized behind unspoken words.
great job chrissy.
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Thanks Deadly!
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Wow
Such images flashing through this old mind of mine. Simple delecious though Vodka does have a sting. But I must say the butterfly is beautiful
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Yes a sting and a bite!
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