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An Abundant Space



Poetry is a lifelong friend, a lover
with whom one need never part,
eternal carousel in youth's heart

Poetry is Mother Earth's emotions;
in night sky, whispered devotions
of the stars.

Growth from stagnation,
brow wrinkles, pencil erasings,
tracings of leaf shapes,
delicious secrets

Ever spinning wheel of seasons,
the water cycle, every reason
and no justification whatsoever.

Poetry is heat,
cold humidity;
childhood,
age old wisdom

Phosphorescent glow;
simultaneously primal and refined,
the weightiest and lightest substance,
continuum of discovery for humankind

Limitless love,
limitless love,
limitless love.

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  • BabyBun silver member
    November 3, 2008
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    Great entry - thanks and good luck!


  • Brit-Girl
    July 26, 2008

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    ooh I love the imagery and metaphors in this write! the content is good and you have a really nice poem here
    Thanks for your entry


  • XUnfaithfulXBeautyX
    April 12, 2008
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    I love this poem its very well written


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    April 12, 2008

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    Ah, Olivia's heart and soul
    poetically placed on the page--
    opened, loved!

    Superb, dear friend!

    Aesthete


  • stani
    April 11, 2008

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    i like this. an apt way to describe poetry! "Poetry is heat,
    cold humidity;
    childhood,
    age old wisdom" age old wisdom! nice write

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