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TickleMeFubar

Here lies the F.U.B.A.R. corpse.
We could not find his head.
No one knows who he is but,
They´re all sure he´s dead.

No one´s really missed him yet,
He has no name for the obituary,
So they won´t even report his death,
To be forgotten must be scary...

His tongue hangs from his gaping throat,
It seems odd that it wasn´t ripped clean out.
In what fashion was this poor soul smote?
Will his head be with him on Charon´s boat?

Autopsy today, deemed inconclusive...
But, Anyone who couldn´t tell,
Would have to be stupid.

Obviously,
The F.U.B.A.R. corpse was poisoned...

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  • Jasmine Minx
    April 18, 2008
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    interesting hun. nice job and hope to read more soon


  • x-Amanda-x
    April 13, 2008

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    strangly enough..this made sense to me in some ways. hmmmm. anyway, the flow and structure was just right for the type of scene you wanted to create. very well written, i enjoyed reading it. keep it up. (:




    ~Mandy~


  • Unique
    April 12, 2008
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    Humorous? yes, different? Of course! And did you do a good job? Absolutely!


  • HollowAngel
    April 11, 2008

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    This is rather entertaining, I like it its interesting. The title is kinda funny but cool, nice write good job.


  • The-missing-pieces
    April 11, 2008
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    the fubar i remember!

    lol! yeah! i love it! its amazing!

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