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Hurting Inside

 

 

 I know I was quiet,

I know I didn't speak,

But why do you have to

just up and leave?
I wish I could change,

I wish I were enough

Maybe if you were here

You could see that much

I know you'll be back

I know you care for me

but what are these things that I can never be?

Oh I wish you were here,

holding me right now,

I don't know what I did and I don't know how

But maybe you'll see and hopefully soon,

until then I will be

at the blue Lagoon

Author notes

I know this sounds like something you often read or hear but this is how we all feel at times.

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  • Larry-The-Faceless
    February 5
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    ???

    and just who was this about? lol


  • NeonRose
    April 11, 2008
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    Oh yes, we have all visited our own "blue" spot at one time or another. Nicely penned, poet.