Enchanting sips,
from softly parted lips;
kissed
&
forevermore missed
Author notes
pic credit: I Kissed Him by, gonejustlikebefore (www.deviantart.com)
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie Time-best rhyme by 2lullabyhaven.
425 points, ended April 11, 2008, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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i love it..congrats at geting bronze

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thanks
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Just the right touch of melancholy in this lovely piece... brings it home!!! Congrats. on taking the Bronze too!!


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Thanks dearheart.
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Love this write! Congratulations on winning the Bronze.


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Thanks a million

Mel
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Wow, thanks for this submission.
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Thank you
I really enjoyed it!! GREAT idea for a contest. Hope you get wonderful entries.
Happy judging!!
Mel
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