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Magic

Pin points of star
scattered across night blue
under a crescendoing sky

Against deepest inks
pasted, is brighter light
of a clear crescent moon

Tonight, wishing...
in spite of constellations
constant to our souls

With warm winding winds
twisting to a turn
return, soft strength

April 13th 2008

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  • TrixieOne
    October 24, 2008
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    I love this piece...beautiful imagery. I can see it in my mind


  • Mezclita
    May 3, 2008
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    The night sky IS magical~ lol... It's nice to let yourself believe & feel so... thank u 4 commenting! <3 Alex


  • bloved
    May 2, 2008
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    The night sky...full of stars...can be seen as magic.

    Lovely write

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    April 14, 2008
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    Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck, Josie