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this pain

inflicted pain
unfairly
unjust
untimely my death
because
of selfish
bullshit
not giving me a chance to
show
feel
love
care
now i
lay here
beeping mechanisms
beside me
bandaged wrists
splitting head
tears running dry
eyes
puffy
left here alone lifeless
and
not caring anymore

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  • passionate-poet
    April 11, 2008

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    aw this is a very sad poem so full of devoid feelings its like the kind of poem that makes me feel the pain that youre experiencing and describing in the poem,
    -hugs- thank you for sharing with the rest of us!