I Love You
Because my crush for you is true
You, the woman he saved, holds; his heart
Hoping for just that one last chance to see my truest love
Opening the doors to new loves and possibilities
You cannot stand to be around
By tomorrow you will be my man
For this was now the end
"She is loved forever more"
You are just as faulty as the rest
Don't let me go once again for I could not travel ~one more mile~
Or will I remain your forbidden desire?
But lord help me again, for my baby you have chose
As he closed his eyes and said
... I Love You ...
Author notes
This is just the last lines of some of my poetry put together. I really enjoyed doing this. It seems to really fit. I hope you enjoy it too. It was just something i wanted to try
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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There were a few contests doing this kinda thing and it did amaze me how the lines from different poems actually still told a story... and yours does too!
This is great.
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this poem is great i love it you put some feelings in this i am very proud of you.
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WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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