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Poetry In Motion

Beauty slides legato down streets
as notes flow through purest air.
Pavements flooded with people, only
one worthy of the title of true musician.
Possessions being nothing but a fiddle
and the desire to turn notes inked
on distressed manuscript
into poetry in motion.

A contest entry

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  • Felixthecat7
    September 25
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    This is a pretty good
    poem keep writing
    Ya awesome

  • bravo, bravo bravo!

    i almost feel like crying every time i read this. not cause its so bad (lolz), but because it is so beautiful. this is the winner, it has so much feeling and grace, i can't imagine anything better. i love, love, love it! thank you soo much for sharing.

  • i like your use of musical refrences to give the poem and actual feel of movement and fealing