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A contest entry
- Wit-torical Hatred by Minstrel Knight.
300 points, ended June 8, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Judge me...Everyone else does..judge my poetry, not many do:P
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There's alot of pain going on in this piece...others can be very judgemental but there are people out there who don't judge(thank goodness) Love yourself and the rest of the world can't touch you. I wrote a poem that speaks on this subject, its called "Nobody's Perfect"
Take a look if you want!!
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Judging the poetry: I don't think this really constitutes true poetry. I thinkt his piece right here was more of a way of venting. It doesn't really have anything to make it original and I know there are tons of other things just like this. I would challenge you to channel these feelings into some sort of narrative. Tell a story about someone who feels this way, maybe in another time period. Choose your favorite.
Judging you: I judge you to be someone with more brains than most. Don't let the judging get you down. If they believe you to be a punk or an emo, what does it matter? They don't know you and even if you were these things (which, are they truly so bad?) it is surely better than what they are. What do they think punk is? What do they think emo is? If they think it's a person that cuts themselves, dresses a certain way, and listens to a certain type of music, fine. They can think what they like. Whether it's true or not it doesn't really matter. Even if it is true, is that really such an evil thing? No... not really. And to be honest, I have met far more popular people that cut themselves than outcasts. They are pointing fingers at others to draw attention away from themselves.
Now I am rambling. Sorry. I just hope my words can lift your spirits some. The hardest thing is realizing that all this pain you're feeling from judgmental people is pointless. But once you can overcome it and say to yourself, "So what? What do I care what you think?" and move on without being phased, things will be a lot better.
If you're interested, I will dig up some of my old similiar poetry and send you the links. -
Sweet
It's reminicent of the crap I put up with
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I Like This It Is Alot Of How I Feel It Hurts To be Labeld Really Cause Sertain "Clicks" Dont Asociate With The Other Ones Labels r For Flippin Soup Cans Theres No Right To Even Have Them Clothes Dont Tell Who We And Who Are Toehr People To Judge Us Great Write
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perfection is a flaw...
rocken, people suck lol
the only things that are perfect in this world are the flaws
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the idea of this poem is great, however, I'm not too big on poems with repeating lines in different stanzas, so I cannot really say that I really like the poem in entirety. Good effort, though!!
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when i first read this i was like wow ... thats it wow gr8 write. Tell me what you think,
And tell me what I am not. thats great so real and so i feel its me. -
good write
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wow this is deep
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