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Chaos

tick tock
tick tock

listen, hear the sounds of this land
feel the words, see the pain

ever sat in silence,
and heard the roar of flames

ever feel the burning inside
as you freeze up outside

listen to the shattering glass
bye bye mind,
hear the roaring,
that is the burning inside

Can you hear that screaming?
That is me,

hear that thud of flesh on flesh..
Seen that shattered stature..
lets hope he can be fixed as easily.

hear the sirens?
the shattering glass.
the crunch of bone.
the honk of horns?

oh shit..that was me.

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  • Harlequin Bunny
    April 29, 2008

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    This is a really strong write .. is it from when you were hit by that car? I'm assuming it is .. I apologise if I'm wrong. I liked the ending, like you're just watching the scene as a bystander and then realise .. "oh shit..that was me."


  • Dawliah
    April 14, 2008
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    Creepy.