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what does she see

she gazes into the mirror
ponders her image reflected there
she frowns and tears form
as she sees nothing for which to care

she sees ugliness
she sees signs of aging
she sees overweight
she sees nothing to inspire

she glances at her wrists
the scars remain there
she believes to be pretty
the only thing attractive about her

she caresses the cut scars
loving them in remembrance
she feels the pain again
she relishes in the memory

she wants to cut again
but promises made not to be broken
she wants to slice again
he doesn't care anyways

she grips the knife
she holds it out
she slices deep
blood spills

she's happy once again
watching blood stream
no one here to care
so she will enjoy

pain sweet pain
love sweet love
life sweet life
death sweet death

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  • Atrophya
    August 18, 2008

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    oh SIN! Please don't cut!
    I was there once. It took a while to get out of it and the urge is always there when things get tough and hard but, you have to put it away because if not, you'll be stuck in the same hell everyday and never change.

    you'll be okay SIN. I'm always here. and you always support me by reading my crappy poetry when you can just walk away.

    =[

    you're like awesome!

    DX

    please don't be sad nor hurt yourself!


  • jeseejoy
    April 16, 2008
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    amazing! thats all i can say


  • EmmaLuLu
    April 11, 2008
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    well this to me is a very teenagery poem. i looked at ur age and i was like, man this person is good at writing a poem like this! yeh, many girls today feel the same. many teens too. We just need to be happy with what God has givin to us, if not..well..ur going to end up sad for the rest of ur life. very nice x please check out my poems and comment and them too x