She's so tiny
Like a dream
That's what they said to her
Fur so soft
Silk browns and whites
Lay still when she is not
In her eyes
Is liquid gold
Dripping with questions
Afternoon
She romps around
Come play with her, she begs
In the night
She curls close
Fragile and warm by you
Pick her up
And hold her tight
That's all she wants from you
She has magic
You are sure
Because it's worked on you
Sweet little Kia
In your home
To make sure you still smile.
Author notes
A sweet little kitten, innocent and playful. Can you tell from reading this that Kia is a cat? Sorry is that's not clear...let me know if you like it!
~Cj
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awww!!!!!!!!!!It is so cute. Wow, its a really gentle, sweet poem. I really like it
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you can definetly tell that Kia is a cat, with soft fur, and curling up beside you, and the soft fur. i might have thought puppy, but for the soft fur. she sounds so delectibly cute. now i want another cat (even though if i had two thered be no room left for me on my bed. hahah) this piece is so soft and sweet and... pink. it is a very pink piece of work and i love it.
~theharvester
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Ah, Kia sounds adorable. I figured she was either a puppy or a kitten. She sounds like so much fun! I have a cat myself and when he was little he was so innocent and so trusting. Loved your use of imagery!
~M~
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