Suppose my childhood was normal,
one mom, a dad, two cats and debts,
even though mum
rented out four inches of heaven
to the pious who liked to drink wine
with feminine pheromones,
straight from its source, while she
prayed in a way no priest could:
“Oh Jesus, lick me, oh yes, yes, yes…”
and it didn’t matter that I tried
to suffocate those sounds from my mind,
with fingers inserted deep in my ears,
dad always reminded me why we ate breakfast.
As I grew the walls seemed thinner, prayers louder,
and I could imagine the slick transfer of tongue to lips,
as an erection pushed me from child to man,
well lubricated with moans.
I ran away the day some layman
recreated the crucifixion: I bet
Jesus never screamed like that.
Whores playing pseudo ladies, airs and graces
with yo-yo knickers: down, up, down, up…
fine places to leave small traces,
but all I could see was mother and me,
and amour became a rage giving retribution
to the bags of skin using a hole for control.
Progression is natural, evolution refined,
selecting a wife of mother incarnated
a pseudo someone to blame,
but she didn’t like the game with her as the fool,
pretending the tool was reality,
especially when I upped the stakes
so sharp it sliced lips as they closed
around semi-formed lies;
strange how a silent room said all her goodbyes.
Now I stalk, a shadow within shadows,
looking to put to rest mothers prayers
by inserting revenge into vertical smiles,
bleeding forgiveness in a menstruation
not governed by the moon.
Author notes
No I'm Not A Serial Killer, Neither Do I Wish To Be .. This Is Just Imagination.
A contest entry
- DW Challenge Round 2 by Ktulu Blackwolfe.
525 points, ended April 22, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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uh wow.
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wow.
that was really interesting.
totally creative perspective i must say. you completely put yourself in a killers shoes and i give you so much credit for that. uhm.. wow. there isnt much more i can say!
thanks for entering and
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This is well thought out and also well written. I think this is so true as too many people play the "blame Mom and Dad" card.
Good luck in the contest.
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Wow... This is brilliant, and it shows me yet again why I am such a fan of yours. This is so darkly-descriptive and raw, and I loved it to bits! Well done, and good luck in the contest.
*hands you gold trophy, since you'll most likely win it anyway*
Peace!
Laura xxx
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This is an awesome look into the mind of a killer. An awesome write and a terrific read. Good luck
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A superb piece. A chilling insight to an insane mind, very well written. Good luck in the contest with it
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chills...............
Bro...You are so talented...I do think you could write screenplays for some movie that could scare the pants off of anyone...I have goosebumps and I had to peek through y fingers to finish reading this, (I always watch scary movies like that hehe It makes it easier) You rock...There is no one better at dark, yep you are still the shadow knight .....he retains his crown
Lynda
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