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Picante Sauce

I reach across the table,
towards a glass bowl
filled with chunky sauce.

My mouth waters at the thought,
oh ,the taste of picante sauce!
How I will search for thee!

Call it an everlasting love,
a love for hot foods.
But I prefer an obsession.

But I prefer a love,
love, for the spicy,
delicious picante sauce.

Author notes

It is times like these I wish I had some Mexican food.  YUMMM...
- -Six billion people, with one name. (Thirty Seconds to Mars.)- -
Written December 10th, 2003

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  • September
    June 27, 2004
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    nice job i love it its such an interesting and unusual topic to write about but you make it work!


  • bloodiedFROG
    December 13, 2003
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    ooh haha you have made me hungy....I luvs spicy foods so......haha ok I must now got get some foot to cheeeeeeeew haha.........luvs it ^.^

    .........Fr0ggy

  • thisdork
    December 11, 2003
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    i love it...great job...(Homer Simpson impretion)hummmmmmmmmmmm... hot sauce...hehehe but ya i love and mexican food its the shitz...even though it gives the people that are not quite experienced with it the runs hahaha i crack my self...but seriously great job funny, eloquint, short,sweet and HOT HOT HOT!!!