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The Strong Broken Angel

As she falls upon the floor
Her wrists slit open
Bleeding uncontrollably
Inside her heart is broken

She always seemed so strong,
She was always smiling
No one could have ever guessed
That inside, she was dying.

She was my best friend,
The strongest person you'd ever meet
But now she lay under ground
And at her grave, I weep..

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Option 5, quote -"Cracks in the concrete are reminders that you break no matter how strong you are"

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  • Dead Star--x
    April 14, 2008

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    She always seemed so strong,
    She was always smilingr
    No one could have ever guessed
    That inside, she was dying

    my favorite stanze♥

    Dead Star--x