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For The Love

Stoned,
    in humanity's flawed design,

lips tilt,
    pressing vineyard sweet wines,

embracing tenderness,
    cherubim entwine








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Prompt: Picture Prompt (15 words)

Picture: DesWalsh@photobucket.com

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  • Stardust-luvr
    April 28, 2008

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    well done hun as your words speaks loudly in their brevity xxx love the angelic image many blessings always xxxx


  • Patpowers silver member
    April 11, 2008

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    As for this poem you did fine! Nice thing to write in 20 words! THANKS!!


  • tara wilson gold member
    April 11, 2008
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    this is so sweet