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~ Whisper Away ~

Whisper sweet nothings.     

       

              

            Hollowed promises were dismissed,      

                   while entering the canal where               

                           memories are stored.

 

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  • jasminerose
    April 11, 2008

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    To make new memories from one sweet whisper, can certainly erase all that was lingering in lost promises!
    A very beautiful take off the picture!!
    I wish you all the best!
    Jasminerose


  • tomisb
    April 11, 2008

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    Everything kept in a sacred grove grows with wonder and love and stories wrapped in dreams waiting, yes, waiting to slip into your world. The promise is not on the lips of a lover but kept nested in the heart of the loved.
    Tom B.

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